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Post by Ninmast on Apr 18, 2009 9:08:12 GMT -5
Alright, then, my bad. The rest still needs fixing, though.
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Post by irislovely on Apr 19, 2009 18:41:04 GMT -5
Oh my gosh, my head hurts.... >_<
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Post by irislovely on Apr 19, 2009 20:39:50 GMT -5
Well, I've been changing it a little bit at a time. I know you people must be getting angry with me because I'm taking so long.
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Post by Ninmast on Apr 20, 2009 10:43:26 GMT -5
Not at all. You're doing great, really. We're not at all upset with you.
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Post by irislovely on Apr 20, 2009 17:26:13 GMT -5
Thank you! And I like your sig. It's way cool. I love Mega-Man! So, what all do I need to fix now?
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Post by Ninmast on Apr 20, 2009 19:52:09 GMT -5
Yup, Mega Man's great! Can't get enough of it, myself!
Why was she killed by gunshot because her mother died in a car wreck? Also, why was that she could hear spirits as a child important now that she's dead, anyway? Did it just show she was spiritually sensitive? Whatever it is, that needs to be in there, too. And explain what a Zanpakto and Bankai are.
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Post by irislovely on Apr 20, 2009 20:29:50 GMT -5
Ok, thanks. This is accually kinda fun. I mean, I have Ziste' as many different characters. I have her as a normal random story, as a Naruto Chuunin, as a Bleach Espada, a Nobody for Kingdm Hearts, and many others.
I like to write fan fics, but I'm trying to get myself out of that habbit. It's like stopping a murderer stop killing people, lol. That was a bad annagligy, I appoligize.
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Post by Ninmast on Apr 20, 2009 21:02:54 GMT -5
There's nothing wrong with writing fan fiction. The problems arise when you only write bad fan fiction. ;D But not to worry! We can help with that, too! We live to help each other improve as writers of any sort. As for reusing the same character for fifty different roles, eh, you might want to try making different ones ... Otherwise, you have to make a separate AU profile for each and every one, and I'm sure you don't like rewriting the same base character over and over any more than we like reading it over and over.
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Post by irislovely on Apr 21, 2009 5:55:26 GMT -5
I don't mean the exact same character, i worded that wrong. I truely only use the name Ziste' when I'm making up a really great idea. Which isn't very often cause I don't have enough time anymore due to school and homework.
I have two other characters that I've put alot of effort into. Sizo Iris and Sakura Enjeru. Iris is a nun and Sakura is a vampire victim.
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Post by TrueBlue© on Apr 21, 2009 7:33:22 GMT -5
Your analogy made me giggle... Iris sounds interesting. I don't think it's uncommon to use the same face and name in many universes, at least starting out. Everybody does it, (at least, I did. ) and there isn't really any harm to it, like there isn't really any harm in dragging a certain doll everywhere you go when you're a toddler. Just, you know, so long as you grow out of it. Most of the older members here are writers from Fanfiction.net, actually. I wrote Power Rangers stuff! Oh, and since nobody else has said anything, I'll say it. Don't double post. You can edit the post previous with the Edit button in said post's upper right-hand corner. The post's left, but your right. The post doesn't have a left, it's inanimate. Usually, it's inanimate, but some members have animated avatars and signatures that show up in their posts. I just felt like I should say something is all.
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Post by irislovely on Apr 21, 2009 15:54:28 GMT -5
Ok. Thanks. And I spelled analogy wrong, whooop~ lol Well, is there anything I need to fix with the character?
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Post by Toriji on Apr 21, 2009 16:36:04 GMT -5
It does my blackened heart good to see that you are taking to this so well. Yes, they are thorough, which is something I have to deal with in every character. I'm happy to see another friend of mine on now that AoD has left for a while.
Well, best of luck and remember to call [or whatever] me if you need and specific help.
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Post by irislovely on Apr 21, 2009 16:51:51 GMT -5
Okay! Well, if there's still any problems with the character, tell me, I'll change them. I'll be working on Sizo Iris for a few days, I guess.
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Post by TrueBlue© on Apr 22, 2009 11:55:53 GMT -5
Aha! You're Toriji's friend! Make him come back and post in Embers.
I see you're a novice, but I think you have your head on straight. What do you think you have left to do with the character? Do you think it's as good as it can be at this point?
Art is never finished, Iris. Don't stop at "acceptable," just because there's nothing wrong with the profile doesn't mean it can't be so much better. Keep messing with it now and then.
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Post by irislovely on Apr 22, 2009 16:03:14 GMT -5
Thank you. I've been out of it this week. And yes, I am Toriji's friend, and I've been his friend for a long time, lol.
Hmmm, I'll look at Ziste's profile some more and change some if I see something I want chaged.
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