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Post by Spikester on May 7, 2008 23:38:41 GMT -5
Name: Lan
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Timeline: Modern
Power Level: Mid-Tier Low
Allignment: Neutral
Appearance: Has brown hair and blue eyes, and stands to about 5'8". he usually wears blue jeans and since he does his own wash, he has a wrinkled shirt on, which he always tries fixing.
Personality: He has ocd and must have things even. he will only eat an even amout of things, and has to have things organized. he can withstand it to a certain point though
History: He was born in a small town, but had trouble with getting along. kids would pick on him and would tease him for his strange habits. his parents, not knowing what was wrong, would often scold him and punsh him. but, after a visit to a shrink, he was offically labled as having OCD. since then, he never really had much friends. so he started to get into studying cooking, which made his OCD calm down a bit. when he was 18, he moved into a small apartment, which he lives up to till now. he currently works as a cook in a italian joint in the city.
Powers: None
Weapons: None
Weaknesses: Odd things
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Post by Ninmast on May 7, 2008 23:58:04 GMT -5
Come on, you can do better than that, bud.
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Post by Spikester on May 8, 2008 0:33:02 GMT -5
like what? i'm not use to regular, and his past isn't much of a thrill.
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Post by Ninmast on May 8, 2008 1:21:42 GMT -5
You could fill out his appearance and personality more at the very least. Then maybe tell us something about his life growing up in his history and what he does now.
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Oathkeeper
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Post by Oathkeeper on May 8, 2008 8:30:29 GMT -5
Also, how is he a 4?
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Post by Beanybag on May 8, 2008 9:00:26 GMT -5
He's Low mid-tier, so he's a two. o=
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Post by Spikester on May 8, 2008 11:44:37 GMT -5
there, i made it bigger by a bit. its not perfect i know.
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Post by Ninmast on May 8, 2008 16:34:28 GMT -5
How about more on his personality? I can point out first hand that people with OCD, that isn't the be-all and end-all of their personalities.
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Post by Oathkeeper on May 8, 2008 18:11:59 GMT -5
It says mid tier low.. that is a four.
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Post by Beanybag on May 8, 2008 19:36:00 GMT -5
No, it's a two. Mid-Tier of the Low Power, not Medium power low-tier. o:
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Post by Ninmast on May 8, 2008 23:44:22 GMT -5
Beany's got it right, Oath. Thanks for trying to help him with it, though.
That's why I usually include the number right next to it just to clarify, saying "Mid-tier Low (2)" instead of just the words.
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