Max Renzor

[Toriji]

Name: Max Renzor

Age: 42

Gender: male

Timelne: Modern

Power level: 2

Alignment: Neutral

Appearance: Muscular build, short frame. Spiked black hair and SWAT style body armor and camo.

Personality: Confident in himself, and brotherly in his interactions with others. He likes to protect people, but make them think they are doing it for themselves.

History: He has been a Marine since the age of 18. He fought countless battles over the years and finally earned the title of General just as the alien threat reared his head.

As the godesses appeared, he was angered by their sacred beasts and sought to fiht without their help. He trained with the other pilots in his unique quadriped unit. He stays behind in the fights lending assistance to those on the front lines, just as he had in the days before the war.



War Machine: Quadripedal: it is arachniod in shape, with a two-sectioned body, one pair of legs coming from each section. Because of its size, the cockpit only takes up a small ammout of space on the front section.

Rear section: two heavy artillery units with a fire rate of two shells a minute, the underside has a smal docking station for ally airships to refuel and reload up to ten times.

Front section: Four .50 cal turrets operated by an auto-lock system that is fairly accurate. The underside carries multiple heat-seeking missle neworks, for taking out faster aircraft. They are only semi-tracking.

Weaknesses: He is human and can easily be killed. His war machine is a large target and hard to manuver.

[Ninmast]

If this is for Goddess of Battle, I'm going to have to ask for more detail in the history. Also, from General to Pilot is actually stepping down in rank. Granted, it would have been considered very patriotic for him to do and his previous rank would have definitely made sure he didn't drop below Commander, but just something to keep in mind.

Also, I've noticed that people like the Bipedal. Just a heads up, yes, it's the most customizable, but it's also made based on Man's technology, so its combat stats are actually lower than that of the other three vehicles that are based off of Sacred Beast technology. Not saying you should change it. Shoot, maybe he hopped in a Bipedal before the goddesses arrived with the Sacred Beasts. That's an angle you could go with his history, being in there since the beginning of the conflict as he's been.

Edit:

In fact, with additional thought, maybe he's personally miffed that these goddesses think Man needs so much help, maybe he thinks that the Bipedals are the best way to show what Man can do because they're what He made on His own. Granted, he IS a military leader and he isn't going to shun help or put down other soldiers for flying the other models, but it's definitely a facet of personality you could consider incorporating to give him more depth.

[Toriji]

Thanx! That's a good idea. Btw, do you mid if I customize the bipedal into a quadripedal model?

[Red14]

But... won't that defeat the point of Nin's story pointers?

[Ninmast]

I don't mind, but remember if it's a quadruped, it's because it's a heavier platform. That means it'll be slower and less agile.

[Toriji]

yes I know, but I expect him to be the heavy guns, for the middle lines.

[Ninmast]

Or point defenses for military installations, both positions where he wouldn't have to move much.