Post by ketaro on Jul 15, 2009 6:04:00 GMT -5
Finally a continuation of my Black Doll Project. Oh, that sounded kinda nice. (Makes note of that title)
It's been awhile since I've put any real work into making a character so any comments would be appreciated ^^ (Heh, btw, this dude was actually made in spring. I'm only now getting around to putting him up lol. He's mostly an attempt to fill in some holes. Doesn't really matter atm
Name: Zieg
Age: 7
Gender: Male
Race: Doll (3rd Generation)
Alignment: Chaotic Nuetral
Power Level: 6
Timeline: Modern to Futuristic
Appearance: Silver hair, about and hazel eyes. Or should I say eye in that he only has one eye, his left eye. Where his right eye should be is nothing but a blank area on his face. He's clothed in a black trench coat, a brownish-red button-up shirt, black dress pants, and black dress shoes.
Personality: Usually seen with a downcast or disinterested look. A rather boring person to talk as he never seems to have an opinion on anything in specific. He really only talks about the current mission when he does speak up, and generally acts towards completing the mission.
History: Zieg, another 3rd Generation "Black Doll" and one of the rare male ones at that. Most of the 3rd Generation types usually come out too defective to operate and he was lucky to come out with only a small defect, compared to what normally goes wrong anyways.
Zieg was the other Doll, along with July, sent to deal with ViVi on that day she escaped. His report on what happened is much more complete than July's being that he wasn't that ViVi's first target. It follows as such: "Upon arriving at the scene, we had immediately spotted ViVi, not hard as she was the only thing still standing more than a few inches high. It appeared we had arrived unnoticed so July had chosen to rush in with a suprise attack and end this swiftly while I stood back and waited. I'm not one for close range fighting anyways so I didn't bother to object to her. Apparently we weren't as unnoticed as we thought. ViVi suddenly snapped around around to face us and instantly fired what I can only describe as some sort of energy blast from her raised hand at July. It must have caught July offguard, or she didn't think it'd be as powerful as it was, because she had run right into the attack. I hadn't expected ViVi to be as strong as she was for for when the explosion following the hit had cleared, July appeared severely damaged and on the ground unconcious with even her supposedly unvincible sword shattered in pieces. Now I figured I should've backed up July with that initial attack but it was too late now. I began my attack now and unleashed my power on ViVi, continuously firing at her from my long range position. It was unexpected that every hit was simply shrugged off by that Doll as she ran toward my position. A sickly green glow shrouded her right hand that was raised, reaching out to me. I didn't make the choice, for some reason, to try to get away from her when she got too close and reached out, grasping the right side of my face in that sickly green glow. A sudden urge overpowered me then and I started to try to get that hand off of me. I couldn't control this urge as I clawed at that hand, a feeble attempt now. The next thing I knew, my sight was filled with a very bright flash of green and white then I fell unconcious."
It was two weeks before Zieg regained conciousness and found himself back in one of SPECTER's facilities. He'd been told how serious the damage to him had been. The right side of his head and face was basically covered in small cracks and one single, gaping crack that was much larger, like a hole in a wall. He was told that he must've been pretty lucky that his head had held together at all after that point blank hit from ViVi. There was a side-effect of course in that aside from his detailed memory of the encounter with ViVi, a majority of his memories from before that are rather vague.
Powers: Zieg has the standard Doll-class durability, tough enough to take a shot from a tank with only minor damage, but unable to withstand the knockback of said hit. While also being a 3rd Generation version like July, his strength is of course less than that of ViVi's but also still significantly less than even July's. He can barely put a crack in a brick wall with all his strength.
Zieg's defining power is his ability to create and control the elements of ice and water at will. A slight difference with the ice and water he creates is that its black in color. His control is significant enough to affect the weather even, within a 3-mile radius. It's quite easy to tell whether the weather in the area is normal or not because when Zieg messes with it, it rains black rain and snows black snow.
He generally starts a fight by freezing over the ground in the immediate area, then keeps his opponent moving with his long range attacks(i.e: spears, needles, massive rocks all made of ice). It's his aim, assuming the enemy can't fly, to keep the enemy unbalanced on the icy surface and hopefully trip or fall and then die quickly once unable to dodge anymore. A common use of his power is flash freezing the water in a person when he makes contact with them, instantly killing them. Normally just used on common people because it requires several seconds of contact to accomplish.
Equipment: None.
Weaknesses: His right side is a pretty bug blind spot for him as he lacks a right eye and has yet to learn to adapt to this.
Note: Not actually meant for general RP use. (Mainly just to remind myself.)
It's been awhile since I've put any real work into making a character so any comments would be appreciated ^^ (Heh, btw, this dude was actually made in spring. I'm only now getting around to putting him up lol. He's mostly an attempt to fill in some holes. Doesn't really matter atm
Name: Zieg
Age: 7
Gender: Male
Race: Doll (3rd Generation)
Alignment: Chaotic Nuetral
Power Level: 6
Timeline: Modern to Futuristic
Appearance: Silver hair, about and hazel eyes. Or should I say eye in that he only has one eye, his left eye. Where his right eye should be is nothing but a blank area on his face. He's clothed in a black trench coat, a brownish-red button-up shirt, black dress pants, and black dress shoes.
Personality: Usually seen with a downcast or disinterested look. A rather boring person to talk as he never seems to have an opinion on anything in specific. He really only talks about the current mission when he does speak up, and generally acts towards completing the mission.
History: Zieg, another 3rd Generation "Black Doll" and one of the rare male ones at that. Most of the 3rd Generation types usually come out too defective to operate and he was lucky to come out with only a small defect, compared to what normally goes wrong anyways.
Zieg was the other Doll, along with July, sent to deal with ViVi on that day she escaped. His report on what happened is much more complete than July's being that he wasn't that ViVi's first target. It follows as such: "Upon arriving at the scene, we had immediately spotted ViVi, not hard as she was the only thing still standing more than a few inches high. It appeared we had arrived unnoticed so July had chosen to rush in with a suprise attack and end this swiftly while I stood back and waited. I'm not one for close range fighting anyways so I didn't bother to object to her. Apparently we weren't as unnoticed as we thought. ViVi suddenly snapped around around to face us and instantly fired what I can only describe as some sort of energy blast from her raised hand at July. It must have caught July offguard, or she didn't think it'd be as powerful as it was, because she had run right into the attack. I hadn't expected ViVi to be as strong as she was for for when the explosion following the hit had cleared, July appeared severely damaged and on the ground unconcious with even her supposedly unvincible sword shattered in pieces. Now I figured I should've backed up July with that initial attack but it was too late now. I began my attack now and unleashed my power on ViVi, continuously firing at her from my long range position. It was unexpected that every hit was simply shrugged off by that Doll as she ran toward my position. A sickly green glow shrouded her right hand that was raised, reaching out to me. I didn't make the choice, for some reason, to try to get away from her when she got too close and reached out, grasping the right side of my face in that sickly green glow. A sudden urge overpowered me then and I started to try to get that hand off of me. I couldn't control this urge as I clawed at that hand, a feeble attempt now. The next thing I knew, my sight was filled with a very bright flash of green and white then I fell unconcious."
It was two weeks before Zieg regained conciousness and found himself back in one of SPECTER's facilities. He'd been told how serious the damage to him had been. The right side of his head and face was basically covered in small cracks and one single, gaping crack that was much larger, like a hole in a wall. He was told that he must've been pretty lucky that his head had held together at all after that point blank hit from ViVi. There was a side-effect of course in that aside from his detailed memory of the encounter with ViVi, a majority of his memories from before that are rather vague.
Powers: Zieg has the standard Doll-class durability, tough enough to take a shot from a tank with only minor damage, but unable to withstand the knockback of said hit. While also being a 3rd Generation version like July, his strength is of course less than that of ViVi's but also still significantly less than even July's. He can barely put a crack in a brick wall with all his strength.
Zieg's defining power is his ability to create and control the elements of ice and water at will. A slight difference with the ice and water he creates is that its black in color. His control is significant enough to affect the weather even, within a 3-mile radius. It's quite easy to tell whether the weather in the area is normal or not because when Zieg messes with it, it rains black rain and snows black snow.
He generally starts a fight by freezing over the ground in the immediate area, then keeps his opponent moving with his long range attacks(i.e: spears, needles, massive rocks all made of ice). It's his aim, assuming the enemy can't fly, to keep the enemy unbalanced on the icy surface and hopefully trip or fall and then die quickly once unable to dodge anymore. A common use of his power is flash freezing the water in a person when he makes contact with them, instantly killing them. Normally just used on common people because it requires several seconds of contact to accomplish.
Equipment: None.
Weaknesses: His right side is a pretty bug blind spot for him as he lacks a right eye and has yet to learn to adapt to this.