Raven Ridley

[The Crow]

It looks a bit like a Blade ripoff now that I look at it.

Name: Raven Ridley, The Hunter, Saints

Age: 25

Gender: Male

Race: Dhamphire (?) A.K.A. Half-Vampire

Alignment: The Clan, Lawful Neutral

Power Level: 5

Time line: Modern

Appearance: Pale, hair cut short, white outfit, red sword wrappings--> i176.photobucket.com/albums/w173/dominigregor/250px-Raven_TZ.jpg

Personality: He does not talk much, preferring stealth over anything. He is untrusting at best, but that is to be expected in his line of work.

History: A special case as vampires are sterile. It was found out that for six weeks the females ovulate. He was contrived of a human and female, and then the human was turned into a vampire. He was given to be a slave to the head of a major vampire clan, and was killed when he saved the leaders life. He healed quickly, and was set free. He was young at the time, and was trained since then to be a hunter for his master. He grew to love his master, easily laying his life down for him. He does not care who or what h must do, but he will do it for his master.

Powers: Increased healing- does not have to wait for the day sleep to star healing; increased strength- can lift a car up one one side then the other; increased speed- can move up to 70 mph; increased awareness- can sense people a city block away; Vampiric powers- low leveled in telekenisis, flight, mesmerizing (Anne Rice Novels), and bat shapeshifting (basics of most vampire books)

Weapons: Loki- A longsword, serrated on the back with a red rope wrapping hilt

Weakness: Removal of head, Garlic, Sunlight will leave him weak as a human at dawn or dusk, or weaker than a lame kitten at noon, Holy water, Blessed objects, Wooden stake through the heart

[LotusBlackfire]

hhmm, well because the powers are few but so potent this might be classified as a high powered character, but the weaknesses might balance it out, although your alignment needs to be good, evil or neutral

[Teh Donut]

Not necessarily; he is aligned toward whatever his clan chooses to do. Or his master. Basicly means his actions aren't determined by his own thoughts, but rather the thoughts and wishes of his master...so I'd add "Lawful Neutral" his alignment, but that's about it. Not really necessary.

He's no more than High-tier Medium in power level, and that's being generous. As it stands, he's only a super human with vampire weaknesses. I'd put him as being a solid 5, Mid-tier Medium power level.

[The Crow]

Is that better? So he is lawful neutral and a 5?

[Ninmast]

Silver is a lycanthropic weakness, not a vampire weakness. The vampire weakness is to holy water, garlic and blessed objects. If you melted the gold from a blessed object (think Constantine and his anti-demon bullets), that would work, but just silver would not. And I've never heard of a vampire that had pyrokinesis just because he was a vampire. In fact, as I recall, while not necessarily a vulnerability, they aren't particularly fond of fire.

[The Crow]

i changed it. better?

[Ninmast]

Yup! Thanks for the cooperation!