Havvok

[Toriji]

Name: Havvok

Age: [Undead so] ??

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Alignment: Neutral Evil

Power Level: High Mid-Tier(6)

Timeline: Post- Apocalyptic Future

Appearance:

Personality: Highly cynical and sarcastic. Evil, one might say.

History: He is a spectral abomination crated by Toriji after he failed to completely reave his soul. He roamed the earth rotting away until he learned who it was who had made him into what he was.
He then sided with Iske Tanaka, Toriji's clone who rebeled against him. He worked as his body guard and lived with him in his castle until Toriji came to kill Iske. Havvok fought Toriji ,but lost after pinned to a wall and severely injured.
After barely surviving, he retreated to a city in the Himalayan mountains and trained until he had a firm grasp on the martial arts of his world. He now lurks in the shadows, hoping to find his target and kill him.

Powers: He has extemely enhanced strength, as well as speed. His limbs crawl back to him after being cut or torn off.
Equipment: Gauntlets with six inch claws over the knuckles. Spiked cleats.

Weakness: He has a natural weaknes to Holy Water and silver. He is also weak against fire and blunt weapons.

[Ninmast]

Could you elaborate on his personality? How is he evil and why? Has it changed as part of the failed reaping?

[Toriji]

no just a sourly angry and sadistic kind of person.[that's why I put "one might say"]

[Ninmast]

Ah, I see. Nifty character. What kind of undead is he?

[Giant Brother]

I've got a few things. First, interesting character, I like. And a semi-unique weakness. I don't think I've seen a character that's weak against being pummeled and bludgeoned. Most times people are immune to that.

Anywho, a few notes. When you're doing a character that's immortal, undead or or otherwise inmeasurable age, it's best to instead put how old they appear to be. It's good for reference. Also, like Ninmast said, the personality can use some fleshing out. Also, for two last notes, it's always best to describe appearance in word as well as picture. Pictures are great, don't get me wrong, but sometimes we have terribly slow connections that hate pictures, so sometimes verbal description helps, And lastly, normally I'd say the history needs some airing when it's that short, however, you seemed to cover all the bases, so I have no complaints.

Good job.

[Toriji]

Nin: he is a sort of eternal rotting type of undead. He lives forever up until he rotts to dust.

GB: Thanks. I'll think into that next time.

[Kainus Maximus]

The character in my oppinion looks fine. There is one minor issue however I'd like you look at.

He can move a hypersonic speeds for up to an hour each day.

Normally this is a very common ability, however this is ussually only common with higher level characters. Your character is at 6, and at such a speed, you completely eclipse the fighting capabilities of other characters in combat. I see that you tried and lower it's capabilities to an hours use, but really, how long do battles ussually last? Normally five to ten minutes tops. So in essence, it really doesnt lower his capabilities. Your character could basically dance around the battle field without giving anyone elses character the chance to react. Heck, with that speed, one could probably kill another character before they even knew it.

In conclusion, you should either lower the capabilities of the power (lower speed, not time limit) or raise his power level.

HOWEVER, if the power is only in accordance to travel, and cannot be used in battle, then completely disregard what I said.

I dont mean to hassle, I'm just trying to get things to be balanced out for you and everyone else. If you I feel I was wrong in any of the explanation I gave, do let me know, I'll be glad to look at your point of view. Otherwise, as I said, your character looks fine. (though a wee bit more detail couldnt hurt, thats more of a personal prefference more than anything.)

[Toriji]

I changed it to just a general enhancement, nothing to big. That should make it easier to adapt with varying Rps right?

[Kainus Maximus]

Very good, in my oppinion that should work. Just be careful not to over do it in certain RPs. otherwise, you are set.