Shrian Pereb (Star Wars)

[Beanybag]

Name: Shrian Pereb

Age: 22

Gender: Female

Race: Human

Alignment: Lawful Good

Power Level: Medium Low Tier (4)

Timeline: Star wars o.O

Appearance: Always plain in appearance, Shrian is pretty but does not aim to attract others. She gives the appearance of being very at peace with herself. She hair that goes past her shoulders in length, and usually keeps it braided.

Personality: Shrian is a compassionate, lawful, and righteous Jedi. She keeps her emotion in check and does what's right. She will sacrifice her life defending the innocent and greatly supports those around her.

She uses the Sorensu form, however she likens to the idea of "Form Zero" as well. (non-violence)

History: Shrian was born on Coruscant in a "rougher" area. As a child, her parents and younger brotherwere murdered. She doesn't know who, but it was believed to be a common thug of some sort. Rather than turn this into a vindiction and passion against evil, the events instilled in her a compassion of and calling to protect the innocent. Her older brother tried to raise her from that point on, but got into stealing and drug dealing to get by.

She would have lived a very hard life had she not been born a force-sensative. She joined the Jedi Academy at a young age, around 8, and is hoping to one day be a Jedi. She is a great student, quick learner, and a firm believer in the Jedi code - the Jedi Order have high hopes for her. She is a padawan at the present moment.

Powers: Shrian is quick, flexible, strong, and well in tune with the force.

Force:

Typical Force Telekineses: Jump, Speed, Push, Pull, basic telekineses, etc.

Force Healing - Shrian, due to her compassion, highly honed her healing abilities and could use the force to rapidly speed up the healing process of an individual. At one point she was drawn to midichlorine manipulation, but those ambitions didn't last long as Shrian remained loyal to the light side of the Force.

Force Absorb - Absorbs Force attacks and turning it into a strengthening of Shrian's connection with the Force

Mind Trick - Shrian doesn't particularly like this technique, but realizes the uses and the lack of harm caused on the affected

Battle Meditation - Shrian uses the force to instill in her allies a greater morale in battle while reducing the opposition's will to fight.

Force Sense - She has a basic amount of ability in this area of the Force and can sense unbalances in the Force and gain slight insight as well

Force Valor - Shrian uses this to increase the resolve, accuracy, and speed of one's self and one's allies, particularly her allies.


Equipment: She uses a green lightsaber with an Adegan crystal core of the typical 1.3m length.

Weakness: Skilled Jedi could easily out fight Shrian in battle. Basic human weaknesses apply as well.

[Ninmast]

I like this character, but as with most of yours that I've seen, you could really put more into history. Other than that, I really like this character. She's effective, supportive and nonviolent, a rarity in these RPs.

[Beanybag]

I agree, my history is pathetic for this character. =x
I was thinking of adding some other things, but I wasn't sure on whether or not they would be correct in adding into them. I resigned myself to just let the RP decide her history, which I guess is weak :S

I'll add a tidbit back in that I had taken out though.

edit: btw, what did you mean "but as with most of yours that I've seen, you could really put more into history." I thought I usually put a great deal of effort and content into my histories. @_@

[Ninmast]

It's just your last couple of histories have been on the short side is all. It's nothing to worry about. Sometimes, you just can't come up with a good history. I have two characters in my mind right now, a comics-type heroine and villainess, but I really don't have much history for them. I'll be able to lengthen it somewhat by telling how they got their powers and what set them down their paths, but that's sometimes difficult to do. However, being that such is the most important part of a character's history, that is often the best place to start when lengthening histories.

And if you can get that in, even if your history is still short, you really have all the necessary stuff.

[Enigma]

Be careful with Force Absorb, though.

If she absorbs something like Force Lightning (Which is so over-rated in Star Wars) she can go 'boom' if she takes in too much.

Not a lot of people know the first Force ability that the Sith were known for. xD Don't say Lightning either. xD