Post by Ninmast on Mar 20, 2009 11:22:47 GMT -5
I've been posting this on Fiction Press, but at the moment, it seems to be cranky with me. Having been working on a rewrite for some time, the novel is only just now catching up to where it was before, and I'm eager for feedback. If anyone wants to compare it to the original version, you can find it here.
So, without further ado, I give you the first two chapters (with more posted as I finish them) of the first book of The Peacefire Chronicles!
Chapter One
The young man walked calmly into the dark chambers, flicking his light blonde hair away from his pale blue eyes. On either side of him were demons of all shapes and sizes, but when he stepped in, they all cringed back. In fact, they all fell silent as soon as they laid eyes on him. He smirked. The response was almost as good as the one his master got. He looked up at the end of the room where a man sat wrapped in shadows, brooding in his throne.
Speak of the devil, he thought. Literally. This caused another smirk to come to his face as he kneeled before him. “My lord, I believe I have found the one we have been searching for.”
“I search for many. Be more specific.” The man seemed more interested in the ends of his fingers than in the young man.
“I speak of the Chosen One, my lord.”
Any of the demons who hadn’t been paying attention now turned to them. Not a talon scraped as the entire room stood in rapt silence. Even the man in shadows turned away from his fingers to give the young man his full attention. “You have found him? Are you sure of this?”
“There is always the possibility for error, my lord, but I am certain. An interesting fact, however, my lord. It’s a girl this time around.”
The man raised his eyebrows. “Really?” He threw his head back and laughed. “That movement has been progressing on that mud ball of a planet for 50 years, and it just now got to the boys upstairs. They always were hard stuck in their ways.” He focused on the boy again. “So, when will you begin training?”
“Soon, my lord. I must make sure she is ready first.”
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“Star!”
The girl rolled over in bed at the sound of her mother yelling up at her from the kitchen.
“Star! Time to get up! You’re going to be late!”
Finally, she rolled her legs out of bed and sat up, her blonde hair a tangled mess as her blue eyes looked around blearily. She groaned. Her room was a mess. Papers, books, clothes and shoes were strewn all over. She rubbed at her eye. “I’ve got to clean this up.” She stretched her arms up and started to yawn, but saw the clock on top of her dresser. 7:00. She had to be at the bus stop in thirty minutes.
She dashed around the room, throwing clothes on before grabbing her backpack and running out the door. “Bye, mom, bye, dad!” she called as she ran past the living room, not even taking time to look in at them.
Her parents looked at each other for a moment. Ken, her Native American father, sighed heavily, his broad shoulders sagging. “There she goes. Late again.”
Dianne, her mother, where she got most of her looks from, smiled half-heartedly over the edge of her magazine. “Well, at least she’s not as late as usual. She didn’t have time to eat, but at least she’ll be able to get there on time.”
Star hit the sidewalk running. By the time she ran several blocks, she figured she had cut enough time off that she could afford to walk. Not long after she slowed down, she heard someone talking behind her.
“Twinkle, twinkle, little Star ...”
She turned around to see Jake, the leader of a local gang of punks, with three others behind him. Star’s neighborhood was what he claimed as his “turf,” and he took what he wanted of it. As she turned, he stepped forward, continuing to recite the words. “How I wonder what you are. Up above the world so high, like a diamond in the sky. Twinkle, twinkle, little Star, how I wonder what you are.”
Star clapped sarcastically. “Congratulations, Jake. You’ve finally memorized a song that most Kindergarteners know by heart! Those special ed. classes must be paying off, huh?”
Jake smirked at her. “You know what? I’m having such a good day today, I’m going to let you get away with that. Just give us your stuff, and we’ll part ways nice and peaceful.”
Star grinned widely. “Sorry, Jake! You know I’d help you if I had anything, but I gave it all to the last pathetic gang. They didn’t have any jobs, either!”
Jake’s smirk turned into a growl. “You think you’re really smart, huh? A real smart ...”
A shrill whistle interrupted him. Down the block, 14-year-old Tina Brighton held her cell phone above her head. “Hey, you guys! I’ve got the police on the phone right now! So just stay right there, and they’ll be here in a couple of minutes!”
Jake turned back to Star and shook his finger in her face. “You got lucky this time, Peacefire. Next time, little Red won’t be there to come to your rescue.” He turned to the others. “Come on, guys. Let’s get going before the pigs get here.”
Star grinned as she jogged on up the sidewalk to her. “Quick thinking, Tina! I thought your phone battery was dead?”
The girl grinned. “It is. I bluffed them out.”
A shrill, loud voice yelled out behind them in surprise. “You did? That’s so cool! You two have a lot of guts! Talking back to them like that, and then lying to them to get them to run off!”
Star and Tina both cringed at that, and Jake and his three people, two scrawny guys and a big, fat guy, turned around.
Jake’s face was lined with anger. “You what!?” It was like letting loose a group of dogs. “You’re going to pay for that!”
Star grabbed the strap of her backpack as they began running forward, catching one of the scrawny ones as she spun it around, then tossed it to Tina. “Here, catch!”
As Tina grabbed the bag, Star ducked under a swing from the other scrawny one and thrust her shoulder into his stomach, tackling him to the ground. She rolled with it, just missing a stomp from the big guy before coming up into a crouch and catching him with a sweep kick.
He went down as Star was standing up, but Jake was right behind her, and he slammed his fist right into her back.
Star stumbled forward, trying to catch her breath. She wheeled around to face him, bringing her arms up just in time to block another swing. Still moving backwards, she ducked again as he swung with his other arm, then jumped to the side when he kicked. When he swung again, she was ready, and she grabbed his arm, stepping beside him as she threw him over her hip, using his arm as a pivot point and snapping his shoulder out of joint. As he screamed, she twisted it again and kicked him in his back, sending him down and rendering his arm useless.
She stepped back, waiting for any of them to move again, leaning into a defensive stance.
Jake stood back up, his face twisted in pain as he put his hand over his bad shoulder. “C’mon, guys. We’ll get her later.” The rest of them stood and they left.
As soon as they were gone, Tina and Star turned to glare at the girl who had so clumsily gotten them into trouble. “What were you thinking,” they both demanded.
The tanned-skinned girl flinched at their questions, looking down at the ground with violet eyes. “I’m sorry … I didn’t mean to cause trouble … I was just so excited I didn’t stop to think …”
Tina’s angry eyes were as bright as her hair as she handed Star’s bag back. “That much is obvious. Do us a favor, and the next time you’re impressed, don’t broadcast it to the world!”
The two walked on toward the school bus sign, picking up the pace as they saw the bus round the corner, but the girl chased after them. “Please! I’m sorry! I really didn’t mean to!”
The bus slowed to a stop and its doors slid open. Star and Tina climbed on, and the girl followed. The first two sat together, but the girl wasted no time taking the seat across from them. “Please! I’m so, so sorry! But you’re both okay, right? No harm done?” She smiled weakly.
Star sighed. “What’s your name?”
The girl blinked, as if the question was unexpected. “Tanya.”
Tina waited for a moment before questioning the girl. “Do you have a last name, Tanya?”
“Coupfaith. Tanya Coupfaith.” She turned and looked out the window. She was silent for a moment before turning back toward them. “What’s yours?”
Tina looked to Star as if asking if she really had to answer, and Star sighed, shaking her head again before answering first. “I’m Star, Star Peacefire.”
The redhead barely suppressed a groan. “Tina Brighton, hi.”
It clearly wasn’t the warmest welcome Tanya had ever received. She turned forward in her seat, her head down. The other two were more than happy to allow her the space, and a few minutes passed with complete silence between them.
“Peacefire,” Tanya broke the silence, rolling the word around her mouth. “That’s a weird name.”
This time, it took a conscious effort on both their parts not to groan before Star gathered enough self-control to answer. “My father is Native American. The name was poorly translated when the Colonists came over and tried to force them all to speak English.”
“Oh.” Another one of the pauses came, and this time, they didn’t expect it to last. “Why do they call themselves Native American, anyway? I mean, back then, I could see how it would matter, but now, it seems like they’re just trying to make themselves sound like they’re better than the rest of us, just because they’re native. At least whites are just plain Americans. Blacks are called African Americans, as if they don’t really belong, and Puerto Ricans that live in America don’t even get to refer to themselves by the same country, at all. Instead, they’re referred to by another nation, entirely, or they’re called, Latinos. What makes the Indians so special that they get to call themselves Native?”
Star’s eyes were as cold and hard as stone as the bus rolled to a stop. She delayed her response by shouldering her backpack and waiting for Tina to move. “Because we were here since the last Ice Age. Try this concept on for size, Tanya. We’re called Native Americans because we’re native to America!” She mimicked a sarcastic face of shock. “Wow, that’s really hard to get!”
Tanya watched, her face etched with surprise as the two stormed off of the bus. “But-” She sighed as others began to get off. “I didn’t mean it that way …”
Some boy walked past her with a smirk. “Should have thought before you spoke, huh?” His voice was screechy, like he wasn’t through puberty yet, and his laugh was like a crow, cawing as he swaggered arrogantly off the bus in front of her.
“Yeah,” she agreed quietly as she grabbed her bag and followed the last of the people off. “I should have.”
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“Gah! I can’t believe the nerve of that girl!” Star slammed her locker open to get to her books, shoving them into her backpack before slamming it shut again. “Does she never think, or is she just stupid?”
“She probably just wasn’t thinking,” Tina answered, taking out her own books. “She’s probably one of those people who just rattle off whatever happens to pop into their heads, instead of filtering it with some logic first.”
A well-built young man of about 16 with brown hair came up behind them, putting a hand on each of their shoulders. “What’d I do?” he asked, drawing a chuckle from Tina and a smirk from Star.
“Well, Jonathon, unless you’re doubling as a Latino girl with purple eyes and a big mouth,” Star answered, “nothing that I know of yet.”
Jonathon Moore was one of Star’s close friends. He attended the same martial arts classes as she did, and was often her sparring partner. He was the one who gave her the nickname, “Slugger,” in honor of her tomboyish personality and mean right hook.
He grinned, circling around in front of them. “Ah, the girl that caused such a fuss for you on the bus this morning, huh?”
Tina’s eyes widened in amazement. “Wow, news travels fast around here.”
His grin widened. “That’s high school for you! There’s no such thing as a secret, and if there is, it doesn’t stay that way for long!” Jonathon snapped his fingers, turning to Star. “Oh! That new guy was looking for you! I guess he has something to ask you, or something.”
“New guy?” Star quizzed. “Who?”
“Um,” Jonathon muttered, closing his eyes in thought for a moment. “Darien Brooks. Yeah, that’s the guy.”
Star furrowed her eyebrows and bunched her nose. “Darien Brooks? I’ve never met him.”
Tina nodded, though. “Yes, you have. Remember? He’s got blonde hair, kinda bushy on top, broad shoulders, and he’s always wearing a sweater. He’s in World History with us.”
“Are you sure?”
“Of course,” the redhead answered with a nod. “He got full points on that big exam.”
Star threw her head back and laughed. “That would be how you would remember him, wouldn’t it? By test results!”
Tina Brighton was a genius, the real thing, not some figure of speech. When she was in elementary school, she was bumped up two grades because the classes weren’t challenging her enough. The school actually wanted to bump her up further, but her parents didn’t want her to be a preteen in college. School, or more precisely, knowledge, was the most important thing to the redheaded girl, and she prided herself on that knowledge above all else.
She crossed her arms with a huff. “What’s so strange about that? He never opens his book, he never participates in class, and he never utters a word! He never asks a question, and he never speaks up when the teacher asks anything! He doesn’t even say, ‘Here,’ during attendance! He just raises his hand! He never does anything, and he got full points when I missed one!”
“Tina,” Jonathon interjected, “I thought we settled that you were just thinking of the wrong Napoleon?”
Tina threw her arms up. “He wasn’t!”
“Hey, look! It’s the geek patrol! Didn’t you know it’s against the rules to have your meetings out in the hall? You’re going to make everybody sick!” Somebody with a sneering voice had come up behind them while they were talking. It didn’t take much of a guess to figure out who it was.
Jonathon turned around, letting his arms hang at his sides so they weren’t tangled in anything. “Aren’t you late for your detention, Mike?”
Mike was the boy with the screeching voice from the bus that had spoken to Tanya. “Detention? Where?” He spoke with a smirk permanently hanging from his lips that added to his arrogance.
Jonathon smirked in turn. “Oh, with your history, Michael, I just assumed you had one for someone somewhere over something.”
“Hah,” the boy scoffed, leaning against a locker door just as the owner started to move toward it, “as if I’d go serve some boring detention! Yeah, right, they’d have to drag me in there.” He looked up as he saw one of the teachers coming down the hallway. “Speak of the Devil,” he muttered. “I’ll smell you geeks later.” He turned and hurried down the hall before the teacher could spot him.
Jonathon let out a low growl. “Man, that guy’s annoying.” He looked up as the bell rang and people began filing out of the hallways. “Class time. I’ll see you guys at lunch!” He grabbed his gym bag from his locker and hurried down the hall, waving back toward them over his shoulder.
So, without further ado, I give you the first two chapters (with more posted as I finish them) of the first book of The Peacefire Chronicles!
Chapter One
The young man walked calmly into the dark chambers, flicking his light blonde hair away from his pale blue eyes. On either side of him were demons of all shapes and sizes, but when he stepped in, they all cringed back. In fact, they all fell silent as soon as they laid eyes on him. He smirked. The response was almost as good as the one his master got. He looked up at the end of the room where a man sat wrapped in shadows, brooding in his throne.
Speak of the devil, he thought. Literally. This caused another smirk to come to his face as he kneeled before him. “My lord, I believe I have found the one we have been searching for.”
“I search for many. Be more specific.” The man seemed more interested in the ends of his fingers than in the young man.
“I speak of the Chosen One, my lord.”
Any of the demons who hadn’t been paying attention now turned to them. Not a talon scraped as the entire room stood in rapt silence. Even the man in shadows turned away from his fingers to give the young man his full attention. “You have found him? Are you sure of this?”
“There is always the possibility for error, my lord, but I am certain. An interesting fact, however, my lord. It’s a girl this time around.”
The man raised his eyebrows. “Really?” He threw his head back and laughed. “That movement has been progressing on that mud ball of a planet for 50 years, and it just now got to the boys upstairs. They always were hard stuck in their ways.” He focused on the boy again. “So, when will you begin training?”
“Soon, my lord. I must make sure she is ready first.”
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“Star!”
The girl rolled over in bed at the sound of her mother yelling up at her from the kitchen.
“Star! Time to get up! You’re going to be late!”
Finally, she rolled her legs out of bed and sat up, her blonde hair a tangled mess as her blue eyes looked around blearily. She groaned. Her room was a mess. Papers, books, clothes and shoes were strewn all over. She rubbed at her eye. “I’ve got to clean this up.” She stretched her arms up and started to yawn, but saw the clock on top of her dresser. 7:00. She had to be at the bus stop in thirty minutes.
She dashed around the room, throwing clothes on before grabbing her backpack and running out the door. “Bye, mom, bye, dad!” she called as she ran past the living room, not even taking time to look in at them.
Her parents looked at each other for a moment. Ken, her Native American father, sighed heavily, his broad shoulders sagging. “There she goes. Late again.”
Dianne, her mother, where she got most of her looks from, smiled half-heartedly over the edge of her magazine. “Well, at least she’s not as late as usual. She didn’t have time to eat, but at least she’ll be able to get there on time.”
Star hit the sidewalk running. By the time she ran several blocks, she figured she had cut enough time off that she could afford to walk. Not long after she slowed down, she heard someone talking behind her.
“Twinkle, twinkle, little Star ...”
She turned around to see Jake, the leader of a local gang of punks, with three others behind him. Star’s neighborhood was what he claimed as his “turf,” and he took what he wanted of it. As she turned, he stepped forward, continuing to recite the words. “How I wonder what you are. Up above the world so high, like a diamond in the sky. Twinkle, twinkle, little Star, how I wonder what you are.”
Star clapped sarcastically. “Congratulations, Jake. You’ve finally memorized a song that most Kindergarteners know by heart! Those special ed. classes must be paying off, huh?”
Jake smirked at her. “You know what? I’m having such a good day today, I’m going to let you get away with that. Just give us your stuff, and we’ll part ways nice and peaceful.”
Star grinned widely. “Sorry, Jake! You know I’d help you if I had anything, but I gave it all to the last pathetic gang. They didn’t have any jobs, either!”
Jake’s smirk turned into a growl. “You think you’re really smart, huh? A real smart ...”
A shrill whistle interrupted him. Down the block, 14-year-old Tina Brighton held her cell phone above her head. “Hey, you guys! I’ve got the police on the phone right now! So just stay right there, and they’ll be here in a couple of minutes!”
Jake turned back to Star and shook his finger in her face. “You got lucky this time, Peacefire. Next time, little Red won’t be there to come to your rescue.” He turned to the others. “Come on, guys. Let’s get going before the pigs get here.”
Star grinned as she jogged on up the sidewalk to her. “Quick thinking, Tina! I thought your phone battery was dead?”
The girl grinned. “It is. I bluffed them out.”
A shrill, loud voice yelled out behind them in surprise. “You did? That’s so cool! You two have a lot of guts! Talking back to them like that, and then lying to them to get them to run off!”
Star and Tina both cringed at that, and Jake and his three people, two scrawny guys and a big, fat guy, turned around.
Jake’s face was lined with anger. “You what!?” It was like letting loose a group of dogs. “You’re going to pay for that!”
Star grabbed the strap of her backpack as they began running forward, catching one of the scrawny ones as she spun it around, then tossed it to Tina. “Here, catch!”
As Tina grabbed the bag, Star ducked under a swing from the other scrawny one and thrust her shoulder into his stomach, tackling him to the ground. She rolled with it, just missing a stomp from the big guy before coming up into a crouch and catching him with a sweep kick.
He went down as Star was standing up, but Jake was right behind her, and he slammed his fist right into her back.
Star stumbled forward, trying to catch her breath. She wheeled around to face him, bringing her arms up just in time to block another swing. Still moving backwards, she ducked again as he swung with his other arm, then jumped to the side when he kicked. When he swung again, she was ready, and she grabbed his arm, stepping beside him as she threw him over her hip, using his arm as a pivot point and snapping his shoulder out of joint. As he screamed, she twisted it again and kicked him in his back, sending him down and rendering his arm useless.
She stepped back, waiting for any of them to move again, leaning into a defensive stance.
Jake stood back up, his face twisted in pain as he put his hand over his bad shoulder. “C’mon, guys. We’ll get her later.” The rest of them stood and they left.
As soon as they were gone, Tina and Star turned to glare at the girl who had so clumsily gotten them into trouble. “What were you thinking,” they both demanded.
The tanned-skinned girl flinched at their questions, looking down at the ground with violet eyes. “I’m sorry … I didn’t mean to cause trouble … I was just so excited I didn’t stop to think …”
Tina’s angry eyes were as bright as her hair as she handed Star’s bag back. “That much is obvious. Do us a favor, and the next time you’re impressed, don’t broadcast it to the world!”
The two walked on toward the school bus sign, picking up the pace as they saw the bus round the corner, but the girl chased after them. “Please! I’m sorry! I really didn’t mean to!”
The bus slowed to a stop and its doors slid open. Star and Tina climbed on, and the girl followed. The first two sat together, but the girl wasted no time taking the seat across from them. “Please! I’m so, so sorry! But you’re both okay, right? No harm done?” She smiled weakly.
Star sighed. “What’s your name?”
The girl blinked, as if the question was unexpected. “Tanya.”
Tina waited for a moment before questioning the girl. “Do you have a last name, Tanya?”
“Coupfaith. Tanya Coupfaith.” She turned and looked out the window. She was silent for a moment before turning back toward them. “What’s yours?”
Tina looked to Star as if asking if she really had to answer, and Star sighed, shaking her head again before answering first. “I’m Star, Star Peacefire.”
The redhead barely suppressed a groan. “Tina Brighton, hi.”
It clearly wasn’t the warmest welcome Tanya had ever received. She turned forward in her seat, her head down. The other two were more than happy to allow her the space, and a few minutes passed with complete silence between them.
“Peacefire,” Tanya broke the silence, rolling the word around her mouth. “That’s a weird name.”
This time, it took a conscious effort on both their parts not to groan before Star gathered enough self-control to answer. “My father is Native American. The name was poorly translated when the Colonists came over and tried to force them all to speak English.”
“Oh.” Another one of the pauses came, and this time, they didn’t expect it to last. “Why do they call themselves Native American, anyway? I mean, back then, I could see how it would matter, but now, it seems like they’re just trying to make themselves sound like they’re better than the rest of us, just because they’re native. At least whites are just plain Americans. Blacks are called African Americans, as if they don’t really belong, and Puerto Ricans that live in America don’t even get to refer to themselves by the same country, at all. Instead, they’re referred to by another nation, entirely, or they’re called, Latinos. What makes the Indians so special that they get to call themselves Native?”
Star’s eyes were as cold and hard as stone as the bus rolled to a stop. She delayed her response by shouldering her backpack and waiting for Tina to move. “Because we were here since the last Ice Age. Try this concept on for size, Tanya. We’re called Native Americans because we’re native to America!” She mimicked a sarcastic face of shock. “Wow, that’s really hard to get!”
Tanya watched, her face etched with surprise as the two stormed off of the bus. “But-” She sighed as others began to get off. “I didn’t mean it that way …”
Some boy walked past her with a smirk. “Should have thought before you spoke, huh?” His voice was screechy, like he wasn’t through puberty yet, and his laugh was like a crow, cawing as he swaggered arrogantly off the bus in front of her.
“Yeah,” she agreed quietly as she grabbed her bag and followed the last of the people off. “I should have.”
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“Gah! I can’t believe the nerve of that girl!” Star slammed her locker open to get to her books, shoving them into her backpack before slamming it shut again. “Does she never think, or is she just stupid?”
“She probably just wasn’t thinking,” Tina answered, taking out her own books. “She’s probably one of those people who just rattle off whatever happens to pop into their heads, instead of filtering it with some logic first.”
A well-built young man of about 16 with brown hair came up behind them, putting a hand on each of their shoulders. “What’d I do?” he asked, drawing a chuckle from Tina and a smirk from Star.
“Well, Jonathon, unless you’re doubling as a Latino girl with purple eyes and a big mouth,” Star answered, “nothing that I know of yet.”
Jonathon Moore was one of Star’s close friends. He attended the same martial arts classes as she did, and was often her sparring partner. He was the one who gave her the nickname, “Slugger,” in honor of her tomboyish personality and mean right hook.
He grinned, circling around in front of them. “Ah, the girl that caused such a fuss for you on the bus this morning, huh?”
Tina’s eyes widened in amazement. “Wow, news travels fast around here.”
His grin widened. “That’s high school for you! There’s no such thing as a secret, and if there is, it doesn’t stay that way for long!” Jonathon snapped his fingers, turning to Star. “Oh! That new guy was looking for you! I guess he has something to ask you, or something.”
“New guy?” Star quizzed. “Who?”
“Um,” Jonathon muttered, closing his eyes in thought for a moment. “Darien Brooks. Yeah, that’s the guy.”
Star furrowed her eyebrows and bunched her nose. “Darien Brooks? I’ve never met him.”
Tina nodded, though. “Yes, you have. Remember? He’s got blonde hair, kinda bushy on top, broad shoulders, and he’s always wearing a sweater. He’s in World History with us.”
“Are you sure?”
“Of course,” the redhead answered with a nod. “He got full points on that big exam.”
Star threw her head back and laughed. “That would be how you would remember him, wouldn’t it? By test results!”
Tina Brighton was a genius, the real thing, not some figure of speech. When she was in elementary school, she was bumped up two grades because the classes weren’t challenging her enough. The school actually wanted to bump her up further, but her parents didn’t want her to be a preteen in college. School, or more precisely, knowledge, was the most important thing to the redheaded girl, and she prided herself on that knowledge above all else.
She crossed her arms with a huff. “What’s so strange about that? He never opens his book, he never participates in class, and he never utters a word! He never asks a question, and he never speaks up when the teacher asks anything! He doesn’t even say, ‘Here,’ during attendance! He just raises his hand! He never does anything, and he got full points when I missed one!”
“Tina,” Jonathon interjected, “I thought we settled that you were just thinking of the wrong Napoleon?”
Tina threw her arms up. “He wasn’t!”
“Hey, look! It’s the geek patrol! Didn’t you know it’s against the rules to have your meetings out in the hall? You’re going to make everybody sick!” Somebody with a sneering voice had come up behind them while they were talking. It didn’t take much of a guess to figure out who it was.
Jonathon turned around, letting his arms hang at his sides so they weren’t tangled in anything. “Aren’t you late for your detention, Mike?”
Mike was the boy with the screeching voice from the bus that had spoken to Tanya. “Detention? Where?” He spoke with a smirk permanently hanging from his lips that added to his arrogance.
Jonathon smirked in turn. “Oh, with your history, Michael, I just assumed you had one for someone somewhere over something.”
“Hah,” the boy scoffed, leaning against a locker door just as the owner started to move toward it, “as if I’d go serve some boring detention! Yeah, right, they’d have to drag me in there.” He looked up as he saw one of the teachers coming down the hallway. “Speak of the Devil,” he muttered. “I’ll smell you geeks later.” He turned and hurried down the hall before the teacher could spot him.
Jonathon let out a low growl. “Man, that guy’s annoying.” He looked up as the bell rang and people began filing out of the hallways. “Class time. I’ll see you guys at lunch!” He grabbed his gym bag from his locker and hurried down the hall, waving back toward them over his shoulder.