Post by EJP on Mar 24, 2009 17:31:05 GMT -5
Warning, the following story contains blood, death, and nudity. Sorry kids, no sex... yet? You'll have to wait to find out. Anyway, if you cannot handle such things as blood, death, nudity, and EJP's complete lack of writing skills when it comes to a true girlfriend and boyfriend relationship, then you should stop reading this and go else where. You've been warned so no bitching! Oh a side note this story thus far lacks cursing so huzzah!
On another side note or two. The title is still a work in progress and may change as the rest of this is writen. Oh and Star Peacefire is not my character and in fact belongs to Ninmast... or Ninmast belongs to her... its complicated. This is a fan fic towards Ninmast's character Star. In no way does any of the events in this story actualy take palce in Ninmast's or Star's universe. This version of Star is also based around the knowledge I have of the character so it may not be the most accurate version of her. Lastly, this story is not finished, yet and the only reason I'm posting this part is because I'm handing it in as an assighment for my creative writing class to get a review and thought I'd give you all a chance to read what I'm turning in before Lupogun shows up and soils it all. If on the off chance she was ever to do that. Enjoy!
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Kings City, a manmade island off the coast of California, often called the Manhattan island of California. The city was known for its share of crime and crime fighters. However, when an out of town super hero decides to do battle with a home town chaotic vigilantly, destruction becomes wide spread. Buildings are destroyed, cars get damaged, and nuns end up driving into a truck filled with dynamite, all the while these two rivals fight each other. The sun was setting and there in the middle of the city, in the remains of what was an office building she stood, a girl with pink hair and glowing pink eyes. Her clothes were badly damaged and revealed her matching blue underwear and a tattoo of a katana on her right butt cheek. What remained of her pink T-shirt and blue jeans were covered in blood and her shoes and socks were completely missing. She looked down in a pile of rumble at an arm sticking up from under it. The rain started to heavily fall as she noticed a piece of paper in the hand of the arm. Some of the blood started to wash off the girl as she approached the arm and took the piece of paper out of the hand and read it aloud.
Girl: “Was it good for you?”
*The girl paused for a moment and looked back at the arm, strangely the hand appeared to be giving the girl the finger. With the sight of getting the “one”, she let out a short and faint laugh before speaking to herself.*
Girl: “To think, this all started with you seeing me… well wolfy boy, looks like I get the last laugh.”
What had happened was the girl, Star Peacefire, was visiting Kings City with her boyfriend. Star is a super hero and wanted a change of scenery from fighting crime on the east coast of the United States. The Hero League, to which she was a member of, assigned her to a one week task force in Kings City to capture the villains known as Disco Creed and the Cosmic Chump. While out shopping for something sexy to surprise her boyfriend with, a local vigilantly and assassin from Kings City, Tigerwolf, ended up crashing through the wall of the changing room Star was in. After seeing Star completely naked, partly because he had ended up ripping off the nightgown she was trying on when he came crashing through the wall, Tigerwolf ended up killing the man who put him through the wall. Adding further to Star’s rage was the blood splatter hitting Star in the face from the man’s throat being slit. Before so much as a “Hey” could be spoken, Tigerwolf found himself on the receiving end of a very powerful blast of pink energy which sent him flying down to the next floor of the building. Tigerwolf and Star had a history together of working with each other on a few occasions and fighting with each other on many occasions. The two never truly got along with each other and had some past misunderstandings. In truth Star and Tigerwolf would sooner kill each other than sit down for a friendly conversation. After getting dressed, Star started what ended up being a 4 hour fight with Tigerwolf. In the process of that fight, 3 buildings were destroyed and another, mainly the mall Star was originally shopping in, was badly damaged. No one who had worked with Star had ever seen such rage from her. Never had she totally lost control and over killed someone. Just about everyone could tell that Tigerwolf was down for the count long before she had dropped an entire office building on top of him. With the fight over, Star continued to wonder one thing, how did Tigerwolf manage to write that message before he died?
*As the sound of sirens started to get closer, Star flew away, holding onto the paper from Tigerwolf’s arm. She soon landed on a roof top close by; a look of worry was on her face as if the consequences of what she had done suddenly sunk in. She soon heard the voice of another person behind her.*
Voice: “Well some would say that was excessive force. I hope that god of yours has some connections with the review board because they are going to be bleeding mad when they hear about this.”
*Behind Star stood a strong in great shape looking man who looked to be in his 20s and had a medium sized body with short dark blue spiked hair. He wore tight water proof black rimmed goggles with mirror lenses, a black bullet proof vest with a plane black mariachi jacket over it, tight fitting black leather gloves with no gauntlet, green cargo pants with a brown leather belt with a green utility belt over it, and old black military boots. This man was the Modern Swordsmen, a super hero who was currently assigned to Kings City and ranked low due to a bad reputation. His reputation was bad not because he was a trouble maker but because he had mercy killed his first partner. In the super hero community the Modern Swordsmen was more known by his name “El Wray”, than by his super hero name.*
Star: “El Wray… you won’t understand.”
Modern Swordsmen (El Wray): “Well I hope you have better answers than that in your report. If I did this, the review board would have my ass in a sling. You on the other hand… you’d be lucky if they just knocked you back down to my level. Sure, Tigerwolf was on a wanted list, but destroying buildings to capture one man and who isn’t all that evil-“
Star: “He killed people! Lots of people! Who knows just how many…”
Modern Swordsmen: “Yes but the wanted list was very clear in that they wanted him alive.”
Star: “You know they only wanted Tigerwolf alive so they could try to control him.”
Modern Swordsmen: “Actually, I thought they wanted to study him.”
Star: “Then I guess they will get their wish now.”
*The police had arrived and surrounded the destroyed building where Tigerwolf’s corpse laid buried under rumble. Just as the police were setting up a perimeter, two black un-marked Huey Helicopters flew past Star and landed within the police perimeter. Out of the helicopters came men and women dressed in black suits carrying all kinds of equipment. The suits appeared to be taking over the scene. Star watched for a moment before she floated up into the air a little.*
Star: “I expect you take over the investigation El Wray.”
Modern Swordsmen: “Where the hell do you think you’re going? You still have to fill out a report and assist the police with-.”
Star: “Sorry El Wray, but I’ve been exposed enough for today.”
*Star flew away, leaving the Modern Swordsmen to take charge as the lead super hero investigating Star’s super hero incident with Tigerwolf. As Star flew she desired to take a shower and get the blood washed off her. Most of the blood was actually her own. Tigerwolf although not as powerful as Star, was very smart and devious when it came to fighting. Many times during the fight he had caught Star off guard and would harm her greatly. Lucky for Star, she had healing powers and would heal theses wounds before she lost too much blood. However it was the blood that belonged to Tigerwolf that she wanted to wash off the most. Star eventually made her way over to a big hotel that she and her boyfriend were staying in. Sure, there was a headquarters for the Hero League in the city that Star and her boyfriend could stay at, but the two wanted some privacy when not fighting crime. As Star landed on the roof she shoved Tigerwolf’s note into her pants pocket and made her way down to her room, a new thought came to mind.*
Star: I wonder if Henry knows about the fight? I don’t remember there being any news helicopters around so maybe he doesn’t know… I hope he doesn’t know.
Henry was Star’s boyfriend who came with her to Kings City and didn’t have a super hero name. Like Star Henry worked for the Hero League, but was more of a scientist than a crime fighter. Unlike Star, Henry didn’t have any powers but made up for it with his high intelligent and ability analyze things. In truth Henry was more like a police detective, coroner, computer genius, and crime scene technician all in one. While he’d never have his own comic book about him, Henry was greatly desired by many in the super hero community. The only drawback was that Henry lacked agility, endurance, and wasn’t much of a street fighter. Although Henry was considered a nerd by many, he was actually in better shape than most police officers and rather attractive looking compared to super muscular super heroes. Because Henry spent most of his time in a crime lab and not fighting crime on the front lines, Henry didn’t even have a super hero outfit. He dressed somewhat similar to Star, but would wear a balaclava whenever he was out doing field work. Star and Henry have worked together for a long time but it wasn’t until they were trapped in what they thought was a pocket dimension in which Star’s super powers and abilities didn’t work, that the two fell in love. Sadly for Star the memory was now plagued by the very man she had killed. Tigerwolf, was in the believed pocket dimension with Star and Henry and had witness the two’s first kiss. At the time, Tigerwolf was working with Star to find a way out, but it wasn’t until later that it was discovered that Star and Henry had been trapped in the mind of a very power psychic. Strange as it was, Henry and Star’s relationship remained, although Star was extremely pissed off at Tigerwolf. As it turned out the powerful psychic was a girl with a crush on Tigerwolf and thought Star had feelings for him, besides wanting to throw him out of every window of the world’s biggest office building.
*Star made it to the front door to her room in the hotel, room 1042. As soon as she opened the door she could tell Henry wasn’t home. The lights were off and the room was dark with the curtains covering the windows. Once she had closed and locked the door, Star took off her shirt and pants, taking some time to examine each before folding them over her arm. Star felt a little embarrassed by the fact that anyone who saw her could have clearly seen her underwear. El Wray came to mind since he was the only one to come into contact with her after her fight with Tigerwolf. Luckily it wasn’t her underwear that was ripped. Star thought for a moment about bagging her clothes to be examined as evidence. The thought quickly passed as her hands glowed pink, lighting up the room. She touched her clothes and powered her pink energy into them, turn her clothes into dust. A glazed look came onto Star’s face as her clothes turned to dust and her hands became empty. Within seconds Star ripped off her bra and panties and destroyed them as well. Star ran into the bathroom of her hotel room and looked into the mirror at her naked self after turning on the lights. Blood had soaked through her clothes and covered parts of her skin. On her perky C cup breast Star had a tanning line effect with the blood, leaving the impression of her bra on her. However it was exactly what she was feeling as she flew back to the hotel that bothered her most. Clear as day, she noticed a darker colored blood pattern on her right breast. This pattern was of two fingers and a thumb that lay on top of her breast close to her cleavage. Star knew this was Tigerwolf’s bloody hand mark. Had Tigerwolf still been alive, Star would have left to kill him after seeing this mark. However with Tigerwolf dead, anger was replaced by lack of emotion. No emotion came to mind in how Star should be feeling at this time, the only thing she felt was uncomfortable. Star quickly turned on the shower, not caring if it was hot or cold, and jumped in. With soap in hand Star started to scrub herself rapidly, trying her best to wash all the blood off her. Star fell into a trance like state. Her mind started to flash back to the fight, remembering things she had blanked out when she was blinded by rage. It was the blood stained hand on her breast that came to mind and she realized the reason for it.*
Close to the end of Star’s fight, Tigerwolf was unarmed and trying his best to get Star off of him. Star was choking him with both hands around his throat. For some reason Star’s super strength had failed her a little and was unable to crush Tigerwolf’s neck. In a desperate attempt to get her off of him, Tigerwolf did the only thing he could to get at least one hand off his throat. Tigerwolf with his left blood covered hand groped Star through her torn shirt. With that, Star let go of his throat and proceeded to beat him to a bloody pulp and then drove him through and entire office building, top to bottom and through most of the walls. This is how the fight ended, with the building falling down on top of Tigerwolf.
*As Star came out of her trance like state she jumped a little as if being startled. The water in the shower was ice cold. As Star changed to setting in the shower to warm and stood out of the way of the water as it started to warm up. She spoke to herself as if talking to someone else in the room.*
Star: “I… I lost control… Tigerwolf is dead now… Why didn’t he just run away? Did he even try?”
*Star walked back into the water and continued to wash herself and think about what just happened. After an hour of washing herself, Star exited the shower. The bathroom was filled with steam and the mirror was all fogged up. As far as bathrooms go, this bathroom was rather fancy with its yellow brown marble floor and walls. This bathroom had a shower and bathtub separate that were big enough for more than one person. The shower was a walk in with a glass door while the bath was big, white, and attached to the wall and floor. Everything in the bathroom looked far better than most people’s bathrooms but had all the basic essentials as public bathroom would have. Star started to dry off with a white towel that was hanging on the shower door. Unknown to Star was that someone entered her hotel room. With a white towel wrapped around her body, Star exited the bathroom with her hair still wet.*
Voice: “Oh hey there Star.”
*Star was caught off guard but didn’t jump when she heard the voice. It was her boyfriend, Henry and he seemed to have just gotten back to the hotel room. Henry was a well muscular fellow about 6ft in height with very short brown unstylish hair and dressed in an opened black shirt with a black tank top on and wearing blue jeans with black and white sneakers. Only a slight smile appeared on Star’s face as she looked at Henry. She wondered if he knew about what she had done or worse, had worked the scene of the incident. Star started to approach Henry who was sitting on a grey couch facing the bedroom*
Star: “Henry… how are you?”
Henry: “How am I? Whenever you ask that I can tell something is wrong.”
*Star let out a small groan. She had the feeling Henry knew the truth but was just trying to cover it up to get her to confess.*
Star: “I’m sure… you know about… oh forget it.”
*Without warning Star jumped onto Henry and started to kiss him. Henry didn’t try to resist and instead decided to go with the motion. After a minute or two Star suddenly stopped kissing Henry and looked him in the eyes.*
Star: “Henry… I want to forget about today. I want… I want…”
*Star’s mind became clouded with feeling and thoughts. The words she wanted to say, the very words she had been saving up for a special day, they seemed to have just faded away. Instead what she said was blunt and to the point.*
Star: “I want sex.”
On another side note or two. The title is still a work in progress and may change as the rest of this is writen. Oh and Star Peacefire is not my character and in fact belongs to Ninmast... or Ninmast belongs to her... its complicated. This is a fan fic towards Ninmast's character Star. In no way does any of the events in this story actualy take palce in Ninmast's or Star's universe. This version of Star is also based around the knowledge I have of the character so it may not be the most accurate version of her. Lastly, this story is not finished, yet and the only reason I'm posting this part is because I'm handing it in as an assighment for my creative writing class to get a review and thought I'd give you all a chance to read what I'm turning in before Lupogun shows up and soils it all. If on the off chance she was ever to do that. Enjoy!
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Kings City, a manmade island off the coast of California, often called the Manhattan island of California. The city was known for its share of crime and crime fighters. However, when an out of town super hero decides to do battle with a home town chaotic vigilantly, destruction becomes wide spread. Buildings are destroyed, cars get damaged, and nuns end up driving into a truck filled with dynamite, all the while these two rivals fight each other. The sun was setting and there in the middle of the city, in the remains of what was an office building she stood, a girl with pink hair and glowing pink eyes. Her clothes were badly damaged and revealed her matching blue underwear and a tattoo of a katana on her right butt cheek. What remained of her pink T-shirt and blue jeans were covered in blood and her shoes and socks were completely missing. She looked down in a pile of rumble at an arm sticking up from under it. The rain started to heavily fall as she noticed a piece of paper in the hand of the arm. Some of the blood started to wash off the girl as she approached the arm and took the piece of paper out of the hand and read it aloud.
Girl: “Was it good for you?”
*The girl paused for a moment and looked back at the arm, strangely the hand appeared to be giving the girl the finger. With the sight of getting the “one”, she let out a short and faint laugh before speaking to herself.*
Girl: “To think, this all started with you seeing me… well wolfy boy, looks like I get the last laugh.”
What had happened was the girl, Star Peacefire, was visiting Kings City with her boyfriend. Star is a super hero and wanted a change of scenery from fighting crime on the east coast of the United States. The Hero League, to which she was a member of, assigned her to a one week task force in Kings City to capture the villains known as Disco Creed and the Cosmic Chump. While out shopping for something sexy to surprise her boyfriend with, a local vigilantly and assassin from Kings City, Tigerwolf, ended up crashing through the wall of the changing room Star was in. After seeing Star completely naked, partly because he had ended up ripping off the nightgown she was trying on when he came crashing through the wall, Tigerwolf ended up killing the man who put him through the wall. Adding further to Star’s rage was the blood splatter hitting Star in the face from the man’s throat being slit. Before so much as a “Hey” could be spoken, Tigerwolf found himself on the receiving end of a very powerful blast of pink energy which sent him flying down to the next floor of the building. Tigerwolf and Star had a history together of working with each other on a few occasions and fighting with each other on many occasions. The two never truly got along with each other and had some past misunderstandings. In truth Star and Tigerwolf would sooner kill each other than sit down for a friendly conversation. After getting dressed, Star started what ended up being a 4 hour fight with Tigerwolf. In the process of that fight, 3 buildings were destroyed and another, mainly the mall Star was originally shopping in, was badly damaged. No one who had worked with Star had ever seen such rage from her. Never had she totally lost control and over killed someone. Just about everyone could tell that Tigerwolf was down for the count long before she had dropped an entire office building on top of him. With the fight over, Star continued to wonder one thing, how did Tigerwolf manage to write that message before he died?
*As the sound of sirens started to get closer, Star flew away, holding onto the paper from Tigerwolf’s arm. She soon landed on a roof top close by; a look of worry was on her face as if the consequences of what she had done suddenly sunk in. She soon heard the voice of another person behind her.*
Voice: “Well some would say that was excessive force. I hope that god of yours has some connections with the review board because they are going to be bleeding mad when they hear about this.”
*Behind Star stood a strong in great shape looking man who looked to be in his 20s and had a medium sized body with short dark blue spiked hair. He wore tight water proof black rimmed goggles with mirror lenses, a black bullet proof vest with a plane black mariachi jacket over it, tight fitting black leather gloves with no gauntlet, green cargo pants with a brown leather belt with a green utility belt over it, and old black military boots. This man was the Modern Swordsmen, a super hero who was currently assigned to Kings City and ranked low due to a bad reputation. His reputation was bad not because he was a trouble maker but because he had mercy killed his first partner. In the super hero community the Modern Swordsmen was more known by his name “El Wray”, than by his super hero name.*
Star: “El Wray… you won’t understand.”
Modern Swordsmen (El Wray): “Well I hope you have better answers than that in your report. If I did this, the review board would have my ass in a sling. You on the other hand… you’d be lucky if they just knocked you back down to my level. Sure, Tigerwolf was on a wanted list, but destroying buildings to capture one man and who isn’t all that evil-“
Star: “He killed people! Lots of people! Who knows just how many…”
Modern Swordsmen: “Yes but the wanted list was very clear in that they wanted him alive.”
Star: “You know they only wanted Tigerwolf alive so they could try to control him.”
Modern Swordsmen: “Actually, I thought they wanted to study him.”
Star: “Then I guess they will get their wish now.”
*The police had arrived and surrounded the destroyed building where Tigerwolf’s corpse laid buried under rumble. Just as the police were setting up a perimeter, two black un-marked Huey Helicopters flew past Star and landed within the police perimeter. Out of the helicopters came men and women dressed in black suits carrying all kinds of equipment. The suits appeared to be taking over the scene. Star watched for a moment before she floated up into the air a little.*
Star: “I expect you take over the investigation El Wray.”
Modern Swordsmen: “Where the hell do you think you’re going? You still have to fill out a report and assist the police with-.”
Star: “Sorry El Wray, but I’ve been exposed enough for today.”
*Star flew away, leaving the Modern Swordsmen to take charge as the lead super hero investigating Star’s super hero incident with Tigerwolf. As Star flew she desired to take a shower and get the blood washed off her. Most of the blood was actually her own. Tigerwolf although not as powerful as Star, was very smart and devious when it came to fighting. Many times during the fight he had caught Star off guard and would harm her greatly. Lucky for Star, she had healing powers and would heal theses wounds before she lost too much blood. However it was the blood that belonged to Tigerwolf that she wanted to wash off the most. Star eventually made her way over to a big hotel that she and her boyfriend were staying in. Sure, there was a headquarters for the Hero League in the city that Star and her boyfriend could stay at, but the two wanted some privacy when not fighting crime. As Star landed on the roof she shoved Tigerwolf’s note into her pants pocket and made her way down to her room, a new thought came to mind.*
Star: I wonder if Henry knows about the fight? I don’t remember there being any news helicopters around so maybe he doesn’t know… I hope he doesn’t know.
Henry was Star’s boyfriend who came with her to Kings City and didn’t have a super hero name. Like Star Henry worked for the Hero League, but was more of a scientist than a crime fighter. Unlike Star, Henry didn’t have any powers but made up for it with his high intelligent and ability analyze things. In truth Henry was more like a police detective, coroner, computer genius, and crime scene technician all in one. While he’d never have his own comic book about him, Henry was greatly desired by many in the super hero community. The only drawback was that Henry lacked agility, endurance, and wasn’t much of a street fighter. Although Henry was considered a nerd by many, he was actually in better shape than most police officers and rather attractive looking compared to super muscular super heroes. Because Henry spent most of his time in a crime lab and not fighting crime on the front lines, Henry didn’t even have a super hero outfit. He dressed somewhat similar to Star, but would wear a balaclava whenever he was out doing field work. Star and Henry have worked together for a long time but it wasn’t until they were trapped in what they thought was a pocket dimension in which Star’s super powers and abilities didn’t work, that the two fell in love. Sadly for Star the memory was now plagued by the very man she had killed. Tigerwolf, was in the believed pocket dimension with Star and Henry and had witness the two’s first kiss. At the time, Tigerwolf was working with Star to find a way out, but it wasn’t until later that it was discovered that Star and Henry had been trapped in the mind of a very power psychic. Strange as it was, Henry and Star’s relationship remained, although Star was extremely pissed off at Tigerwolf. As it turned out the powerful psychic was a girl with a crush on Tigerwolf and thought Star had feelings for him, besides wanting to throw him out of every window of the world’s biggest office building.
*Star made it to the front door to her room in the hotel, room 1042. As soon as she opened the door she could tell Henry wasn’t home. The lights were off and the room was dark with the curtains covering the windows. Once she had closed and locked the door, Star took off her shirt and pants, taking some time to examine each before folding them over her arm. Star felt a little embarrassed by the fact that anyone who saw her could have clearly seen her underwear. El Wray came to mind since he was the only one to come into contact with her after her fight with Tigerwolf. Luckily it wasn’t her underwear that was ripped. Star thought for a moment about bagging her clothes to be examined as evidence. The thought quickly passed as her hands glowed pink, lighting up the room. She touched her clothes and powered her pink energy into them, turn her clothes into dust. A glazed look came onto Star’s face as her clothes turned to dust and her hands became empty. Within seconds Star ripped off her bra and panties and destroyed them as well. Star ran into the bathroom of her hotel room and looked into the mirror at her naked self after turning on the lights. Blood had soaked through her clothes and covered parts of her skin. On her perky C cup breast Star had a tanning line effect with the blood, leaving the impression of her bra on her. However it was exactly what she was feeling as she flew back to the hotel that bothered her most. Clear as day, she noticed a darker colored blood pattern on her right breast. This pattern was of two fingers and a thumb that lay on top of her breast close to her cleavage. Star knew this was Tigerwolf’s bloody hand mark. Had Tigerwolf still been alive, Star would have left to kill him after seeing this mark. However with Tigerwolf dead, anger was replaced by lack of emotion. No emotion came to mind in how Star should be feeling at this time, the only thing she felt was uncomfortable. Star quickly turned on the shower, not caring if it was hot or cold, and jumped in. With soap in hand Star started to scrub herself rapidly, trying her best to wash all the blood off her. Star fell into a trance like state. Her mind started to flash back to the fight, remembering things she had blanked out when she was blinded by rage. It was the blood stained hand on her breast that came to mind and she realized the reason for it.*
Close to the end of Star’s fight, Tigerwolf was unarmed and trying his best to get Star off of him. Star was choking him with both hands around his throat. For some reason Star’s super strength had failed her a little and was unable to crush Tigerwolf’s neck. In a desperate attempt to get her off of him, Tigerwolf did the only thing he could to get at least one hand off his throat. Tigerwolf with his left blood covered hand groped Star through her torn shirt. With that, Star let go of his throat and proceeded to beat him to a bloody pulp and then drove him through and entire office building, top to bottom and through most of the walls. This is how the fight ended, with the building falling down on top of Tigerwolf.
*As Star came out of her trance like state she jumped a little as if being startled. The water in the shower was ice cold. As Star changed to setting in the shower to warm and stood out of the way of the water as it started to warm up. She spoke to herself as if talking to someone else in the room.*
Star: “I… I lost control… Tigerwolf is dead now… Why didn’t he just run away? Did he even try?”
*Star walked back into the water and continued to wash herself and think about what just happened. After an hour of washing herself, Star exited the shower. The bathroom was filled with steam and the mirror was all fogged up. As far as bathrooms go, this bathroom was rather fancy with its yellow brown marble floor and walls. This bathroom had a shower and bathtub separate that were big enough for more than one person. The shower was a walk in with a glass door while the bath was big, white, and attached to the wall and floor. Everything in the bathroom looked far better than most people’s bathrooms but had all the basic essentials as public bathroom would have. Star started to dry off with a white towel that was hanging on the shower door. Unknown to Star was that someone entered her hotel room. With a white towel wrapped around her body, Star exited the bathroom with her hair still wet.*
Voice: “Oh hey there Star.”
*Star was caught off guard but didn’t jump when she heard the voice. It was her boyfriend, Henry and he seemed to have just gotten back to the hotel room. Henry was a well muscular fellow about 6ft in height with very short brown unstylish hair and dressed in an opened black shirt with a black tank top on and wearing blue jeans with black and white sneakers. Only a slight smile appeared on Star’s face as she looked at Henry. She wondered if he knew about what she had done or worse, had worked the scene of the incident. Star started to approach Henry who was sitting on a grey couch facing the bedroom*
Star: “Henry… how are you?”
Henry: “How am I? Whenever you ask that I can tell something is wrong.”
*Star let out a small groan. She had the feeling Henry knew the truth but was just trying to cover it up to get her to confess.*
Star: “I’m sure… you know about… oh forget it.”
*Without warning Star jumped onto Henry and started to kiss him. Henry didn’t try to resist and instead decided to go with the motion. After a minute or two Star suddenly stopped kissing Henry and looked him in the eyes.*
Star: “Henry… I want to forget about today. I want… I want…”
*Star’s mind became clouded with feeling and thoughts. The words she wanted to say, the very words she had been saving up for a special day, they seemed to have just faded away. Instead what she said was blunt and to the point.*
Star: “I want sex.”