Dartanian and Jia'Shin

[Oathkeeper]

THIS IS ONLY A CONCEPT FOR NOW. I AM DOING THIS FOR INPUT ONLY.

Dartanian: A three par character of 4-5, 6-7, and 8-9. He posses the Right Arm of the Creator, and Left Arm of the Destroyer. The right artm rapidly causes things to come to life, or rapidly de-ages time of non living things. The left arm rapidly destroys life or rapidly ages time of non living things. The two combined powers keep him from aging and cause his wounds to heal rather quickly, including regrowing limbs and sustaining blood and whatnot for life. As he goes from medieval to modern his powers advance farther enough to boost him up, and then at medieval he becomes like Gilgamesh, 3/4 of a god and has the final boost up to the 8-9. Before I put him up I would like feedback.

Jia'Shin is a character I wish to bring over from a Legend of Zelda rp on Gaia. He is the next generation of Gerudo male and wishes to erase the taint on the Gerudo name because of Ganondorf's origin. However, he follows a risky path as he uses the same vile magic as Ganondorf, trying to prove the magic was not evil and perfectly safe for anyone to use.


If anyone has any comments or thoughts that would help me out, I would love to hear them. And if this is in the wrong place, there where is it supposed to go?

[shinaobi]

It should go in RP Discussion, mang; says so in the description for the section.

[Ninmast]

Moved. As for Dartanian, I'm gonna say, ah, no.

As for Jia'Shin, maybe, just maybe, you should pick a more Gerudo name instead of Oriental. Just a thought.

[Oathkeeper]

Actually Jia'Shin was meant to be Arabic sounding ^_^;

As for Dartanian, why no? I wanted details rather than just a shoot down.

[Ninmast]

Jia'Shin doesn't sound remotely Arabic, much less Gerudo.

And let's see, he basically autokills stuff and has the arms of gods. Do you really need me to explain why that's a problem?

[shinaobi]

In fact, Jia'Shin seems Chinese-ish to me; at least, its first syllable is a family name traceable back to the Three Kingdoms era of China.

And Shin is, well, er, me, a body part, and a multi-purpose Japanese word.

You can look up Arabic names on Wikipedia. Yes, it is a reliable source for information on Arabic names. It even provides links to even more reliable (papers written by university professors) sources on Arabic names.

[Terethin]

I'm kinda with nin, if you are fast enough to touch someone, they die. You either age them to dust, and if they happen to have no lifespan limit, you could just reverse their age to the point they never even existed in the first place. I see no way for that to not be power-gaming. Also, why in gods name would he heal quickly? One arms rapidly kills him and and one heals him, hence they would cancel. Making his healing the same as any other regular creature of his race. Unless his race just naturally heals rapidly I fail to see the logic there.